My Writing

For those of you who don't know. I am an aspiring writer/poet. I have had some of my work published anonomously in non profit magazines etc. Aside from that nothing huge. A few people I have talked to on a more personal level have asked me to share some of my work. So after they twisted my arm behind my back here is one tiny thing I have wrote. I would appreciate if negative comments would be withheld.



~Leri Bear

The poem is nicely written. I like how the structure grows then fades . Its almost like there is an underlying reflection of Life within it. You Grow You Fade You Die..

Very nice aleria , your very talented , i would ask to see more but..i dont feel like bending your arm for it
im an ok poet , mine are more..."dark" if i can find 1 of mine id share it with you and see what you think

Well it isn't any trouble if people want me to write more of what I write in this....just ask.

In a positive way, of course.

Issimus wrote:
In a positive way, of course.

roflmao!! nice!!

but yes you are very talented, and your not keeping it bottled up like most ppl

btw aleria if you could , i would relly like to see more , ONLY if you rlly want to post more

Well. If I had been on earlier today I was going to post a new poem I wrote on here. However my teacher was over and found my stash of writing. Needless to say she took the poem I wanted to put on here. When I get it back though I will put it on.

~Leri Bear

i like it, im an ok writer, nothing about poems, but i hav my writing on a website (too long 2 post) but i rlly like ur poem.. i think i found ta address, freewebs.com/livetheifson
ok, so it is ta adress. oh and BTW, its not indented or set n paragraphs >.< (i hate ta internet)

First off: I like your work. You got rhythm down. Though the first thing I noticed wasnt in your work, your preference for no negative feedback. I am an up and coming artist (mainly pastel and stuff) and while I understand that what you make is in essence you (believe, I know. me and my art teacher had some bouts. But shes one of my friends pretty much) negative feedback made my stuff sooo much better. Not to mention, it allowed me to prove my peers wrong on certain aspects like "you ruined this part of the piece" or "This one emphasize correctly". All I can say, is no doubt you're a good writer, just present your works and ask "Hey, whats wrong with this?" rather than "Is this good?"

omg, u draw? u hav got 2 put sum pics up, i hav sum of mine up (sum r 2 big 2 scan ATM) but i hav a Deviantart page
http://livetheif.deviantart.com/

Ill post it when I get home and start scanning them. Some of the pieces are moderately large, and it usually ends up I draw little funny stuff rather than actual stuff.

ah, well, me and my friend, if we COULD scan ta stuff, it would b rlly random, we make soo many things, but its usually drawn on my hands, tats ta prob, ROFLm kinda hard 2 scan a hand....... unless, i hav pics of them on my fone, and i could just send them 2 my email, then post them on deviantart, ya, tat should work, ill try tat wen i get more minutes on my fone (ignore ta rantin, i try not 2 do it)

Heres some of my stuff like I promised. Poor quality because of camera phone, and one of the pictures I accidentally deleted when trying to transfer to my sd card.

PS: Moved my post to this thread because THIS is the correct thread. lol

lmao, yes this is the right thread
but right thread or not
these are still pretty damn good

ya, i like them, althou, i hav 2 ask, bout how old r u? they sem like they would b done by sum1 30+

Im actually 18, about to turn 19. Relatively young, but I know others my age who are better than me by far. Also, last night I was doodling during anthropology class because I was bored as hell. I used Pen as a medium, which is something ive been practicing, but never really touched. It involved alot of hatching, cross hatching, etc etc. Here are the two things. Ones a face (disproportional) and the other is a right arm piece of armor. I was going to do the rest, but screwed up on the breast plate early on and said forget it.

But yeah, age doesn't matter all too much. I mean, the overall quality gets higher with age, but thats because the skill gets honed over the years, and people change how they either view things or draw things by little differences. Such as, starting about a year ago ive been putting a marginal edge on the bottom eye lid of eyes I draw, as well as the top eyelid overlaps the bottom on the outermost edge. Little things like that .Plus, when we get older we can probably shade better. lol, I shade everything incorrectly it seems.

i can chade pretty well, i hav a gift 4 shadin, but sumtimes even i go overboard, (cept n sum cases, were it makes it better )

Dear lord I have been gone a very long time....How is everyone doing?

Edit: May as well put some of my poetry up...its longer than previous and yes I copy and pasted them form my saved documents on my computer.



~Ryan




~Ryan

looks like this alliance is full of talented people. unfortuneately my talent is not on my pc

i luv ta peoms! (i hav been preoccupied 4 a while.........) but yes, i guess ta allaince has talents, which is good.......

soory, my comp was being stupid wen i posted comment, so it duplicated >.<

Very good poems aleria , you have a nice talent those made me sad >.< keep it up though your art should be noticed

everything is very good very nice poem

i need to post some of my stuff but i gott w8 until my course is finished